Developmental Editing

Pinpoint precisely where you’re grabbing your readers and where you’re likely to lose them.

What is Developmental Editing?

You’ve worked your butt off on your draft, and now you’re too close to the narrative to make out left from right. A middling, ho-hum story won’t do. You want this book to take wing and soar, and you’re willing to put in the work it takes to get there. Choose this option if you’re keen to roll up your sleeves and work closely with an editor to take your manuscript to the next level.

Developmental Editing (sometimes called substantive or structural editing) is page-by-page troubleshooting for your story. I’ll provide constructive feedback throughout your manuscript, highlighting thorny areas and suggesting solutions to help you better reach your readers. I’ll also point out what you’ve pulled off exceedingly well, paying special attention to your narrative arc, character development, plot, pacing, tension, suspense, point of view, scene structure, and other elements of craft.

This is a comprehensive, in-depth edit that many writers have found transformative. I often recommend Developmental Editing as an optional second round of editing after a Manuscript Evaluation.

I’ll assess the following components of your narrative:

  • Does the opening hook the reader’s attention?

  • Does each page pull its weight in moving the plot forward?

  • Are some crucial scenes underdeveloped? Do less important ones receive too much attention?

  • Are there plot holes, gaps in logic, or continuity problems?

  • Do the characters behave realistically? Are their emotions and reactions clear?

  • Are your scenes engaging and suspenseful?

  • Is more foreshadowing needed for events to seem plausible?

  • Is the setting and staging consistently vivid and easy to visualize?

  • Does the dialogue sizzle or is it limp in some areas?

  • What else could be done to keep readers turning the pages?

You’ll receive:

☑ The edited manuscript, liberally annotated with feedback in the margin (~3 comments per page on average)

☑ A custom report mapping out my recommendations for revision

☑ A 45-minute follow-up call to discuss the edit, ask questions, and crystallize a plan for revision

Pricing

    • Up to 500 words, no images: $550

    • Up to 500 words + images (for author–illustrators): $650

    • 501 to 1000 words, no images: $650

    • 501 to 1000 words + images (for author–illustrators): $750

    * Prices are in Canadian dollars and do not include taxes.

    • Up to 2000 words: $490

    • 2001–5K: $590

    • 5001–10K: $790

    • 10 001–20K: $1190

    * Prices are in Canadian dollars and do not include taxes.

  • * Prices are in Canadian dollars and do not include taxes.

  • Prices vary according to the length and complexity of your project.

    Please contact me for a free quote.

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FAQ

  • We’ll make a great team if you write…

    🚀 Middle grade fiction — Realistic & imaginary worlds

    🌩️ YA fiction — Character-driven with all the big feels

    🎇 Picture books — Fiction & nonfiction

    🔮 Speculative fiction — Urban fantasy, high fantasy, magical realism, soft sci-fi

    ❤️‍🔥 Romance — Contemporary, paranormal, romantasy, LGBTQ+

    🕰️ Memoir — Identity, coming of age, relationships, family, nature & environment, travel, health & wellbeing, visual art, dance, music… or hit me with your wackiest topic!

    🎴 Graphic novels — Junior, Middle grade, YA

    1. Please contact me and share a brief description of your WIP, along with an excerpt of the first 5000 words or so (or the full manuscript of a picture book).

    2. To familiarize me with your creative vision and publishing goals, you are welcome to fill out this questionnaire.

      Or, if you prefer, we can schedule a free 15-minute tea & chat to get acquainted and discuss your editing needs.

    3. I’ll email you a quote and a free sample edit to help you decide whether we’re a good creative fit.

    4. Once we’ve decided to partner up (hurrah!), I’ll send you a brief agreement. Signature of the agreement plus a 15% deposit guarantees your slot in my calendar. Payments may be sent by e-Transfer (Canada) or PayPal (US & international).

  • Developmental Editing is much more comprehensive than a Manuscript Evaluation.

    In a Manuscript Evaluation, I identify three to five recurring problems in your manuscript and give you an example or two of how they manifest; it’s up to you to locate the rest.

    In a Developmental Edit, I flag sticky areas all the way across your manuscript, page by page, and discuss how you might address them in each context.

  • If you land a book publishing contract (and I hope you do!), you will likely be assigned an in-house editor who will perform a developmental edit of your manuscript.

    That said, you need to land that contract first! The publishing industry is more competitive and cash-strapped than ever. Very few acquiring editors can afford to devote their time to shaping a promising yet rough draft—especially by a debut author. Submitting the very best of your work will help to stack the deck in your favour.

  • A common myth circulating in self-publishing circles is that editing is limited to copy editing or proofreading.

    In a traditional publishing house, developmental editing is performed after acquisition to shore up any weaker areas of the book. A developmental editor will work closely with the author to bring the manuscript to its fullest potential. Only then will it be passed along to a copy editor.

    If you’re serious about your craft and you want your book to succeed on the market, a good developmental edit can make all the difference between a slap-dash DIY product and a book of professional quality that meets the high standards expected by your future readers.

  • 100% Human Editor

    I do not employ LLMs such as ChatGPT to edit manuscripts. I won’t feed any part of your work to an LLM; nor will I use AI to inform my editorial judgment or draft my communications.

    100% Human Author

    I do not accept submissions of manuscripts that are partly or fully AI-generated. If you didn’t create the storyline and characters, or the prose isn’t entirely your own, we aren’t a good editorial match.

    Using a spelling and grammar checker to correct typos is perfectly fine.

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“I engaged Laura to complete a developmental edit of my manuscript. What a treat! From start to finish, Laura was invested in my vision. Her feedback was clear, detailed, constructive, and informed by my goals for the novel. Her enthusiasm for my story and assured handling of the project left me feeling comfortable, safe, and optimistic about the path forward.”

— Aurrey Drake, Speculative fiction author

Laura’s attention to detail and review of my manuscript went far beyond my expectations. I received a valuable critique, plus extensive notes in the margins of my manuscript. She is extremely knowledgeable about all aspects of editing, as well as being personable and kind and easy to work with. Highly recommend!

— Karen Giles, Personal essayist